Why wont you stay dead

" STAY DOWN WHEN I HIT YOU!!" She screamed at the frozen creature takeing a swing with the broken branch agein and hitting it in its broken skull. Breathing heavily and arms were shaking horribly. exspecaly the right now, it had gotten hit and pulled by the other one, that was still behind her..it hurt to hold onto the stick with it. She quickly turned and swings at the other to keep it away, did not want to be hit by the frozen ball and chain agein. Her vision was start to get darker and it was harder and harder to stay on her feet, let alone swing without faling over. Quickly turning around on heiring a groan but that was a grand mistake. As soon as she turned her head the other whiped it weapon at her, getting at the side of her head and she went down like a back of bricks. As blood seeped deep into the snow turning it red, she looked down the snowy path, eyes filling with tear, then clentchs her eyes tightly shut. Wishing that she could have been stronger..to have made it back to see her love...one more time.

-This is a answer to kennys question [link]
sorry i didn't put the question in there..felt like it didn't need it. XD
was going to do a comic. then i got lazy and then i did this!! woop woop!!